Good start. Be sure you add some more percussion and harmonic layers in the song, as well change the melody up once in a while, and it should be good. Try to make it sound unique, too. There is a LOT of techno out there, don't just write more techno that we can listen to anywhere else.
That is a sad truth. I try my best to make my music sound unique. But trust me, there is more to this track than what you just heard. As for the layers, there are several, but I guess they don't come out enough. I'm trying to keep the track balanced because I've always had issues with certain parts overpowering everything in previous tracks I've made, so I'll see what I can make happen.
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